化學報告語言太像翻譯腔怎么辦？

把“upon addition of HCl”這種念頭掐死。寫“滴入鹽酸后”就行。“The solution was observed to become turbid”改成“溶液立刻變渾”。刪掉所有“it is found that”“it can be seen that”，主語必須是物或人。動詞往前頂，少用被動，多用“加入”“析出”“冒出”“褪色”這種帶手勁的詞。